Black Poetry : goodbye to a sex partner

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  1. britestar

    britestar New Member MEMBER

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    softness
    mellowness
    relaxtion, no stress
    no putting on airs
    no worrying about every flaw
    in my physical
    my mental
    is at peace

    and then you get me started
    i can't blame you entirely
    i like getting started
    with the visuals
    the fantasy's
    the imagry of our sex
    the laughter
    the nastiness
    the booking a date
    let's stay out late

    the sex is phenomenal
    awesome and transcending
    a level of nastiness
    unrivaled
    your beauty mixed with
    my maturity
    mixed with our vibing
    makes for a delightful combo

    but i am leaning more towards
    the mellow
    these days
    the peace
    the relaxation
    of no james bond tactics
    of meeting your married self
    and my married self

    can i so easily put this thing on the shelf
    and not miss it
    just by waking up one morning and deciding
    to stop
    because a robin landed on my deck
    because my man and i haven't been bickering
    because sometimes there's more to life
    than hot sex
    orgasms
    and the exchange of fluids

    there's being faithful
    there's being content
    there's letting go
    of that type of sin
    hope you understand...
    that this is goodbye
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi britestar..welcome to the family...this is a nice flow
    Peace
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man- I like this..I really really REALLY DO!!1 I can't wait to read anothe one of your pieces!
    Welcome to the Fam!!!!!!!!!
    :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    from above welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground of love
    welcome from my heart above with hugs
    welcome to open flowz
    go head scribe and sho dis was tyte flowin'
    happy u made it in upon family & friendz
    welcome to the world's loved family in unity in this community:D
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. britestar

    britestar New Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for reading my piece...it is good to be here.
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a message of growth and maturity.
    I can remember somewhat similar
    situations in my past .
    I loved the part about the robin
    landing on your deck.
    peace poet.
     
  7. britestar

    britestar New Member MEMBER

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    yes skyrbe7, i have grown...thanks for noticing!
     
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