Black Poetry : Goodbye My Love

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  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    Does love really last, always and forever?
    You said it does, but were not together
    Did i say something wrong what did i do
    You told me i was perfect, but im not with you
    I have someone else now, who treats me like gold
    So it's in with the , and out with the old


    So im saying goodbye, now and forever
    but one last time i wish we were together
    Im letting you go, maybe i'll see you around
    But as for now she's picking me up off the ground
    She makes me so happy, just being by my side
    And know that the only tears that fall are all inside
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ONE WHOM SEEK IN THE LASTING LOVE OF NOTIONS
    IN MOTIONS OF LIFE IS NOT AND WE ALL MOVE ON
    AT SOME POINT YET WE LOOK BACK INTO THE HOUR
    GLASS AND SEE THAT SOME~ONE
    TO LOVE IS LOVE AND BE LOVED AS U GIVE LOVE
    FROM THE HEART BODY & SOUL.................
    ..................MOVIN' AHEAD
     
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    (Drifting Away!...)

    Lovely,poem,very heart felt. Go on wit yo bad self,Congradulations wit the baby and the you're soon to be wifey,lol,Wish you much happiness! (Wait a minute!,I already said that!,) Well, I am going to say it again! Hee,hee,hee. Tight scribe.
    Desert Storm
     
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