Black Poetry : Goodbye, my love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blk Kween, Feb 23, 2001.

  1. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do you feel nothing for me
    can i not produce the smallest sparkle in your eye
    why confess you love me
    when your physical display tells me what you say is nothing but a lie

    holding onto my heart
    only wanting to give it to you
    nonetheless, never have you been deservant
    so what is a woman to do

    give you some shade
    put my heart away
    talk to you with my head
    and let the background fade

    you have had a hold on my life
    squeezing my heart in your hand
    now I must leave,
    and travel another land

    when will you learn
    what will it take
    I won't be around
    when you have to deal with your biggest mistake

    Goodbye, my love
    Sorry that WE couldn't be
    Your road will become rocky,
    and have fun wallowing in your
    self pity,
    pain,
    and misery


    Blk Kween
     
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Such an honor and pleasure to have you grace this page
    with your flow ... Thank You Blk Kween !!!

    Thank You Thank You Thank You !!!!

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Destee
     
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    This is classic Blk Kween

    Good to feel your flow....Been missing you.
     
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    i like this man so many good pieces i would have neva seen had i not dug into the archives LOL :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet and beautifully posed sistah u did it up here
     
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