Black Poetry : Goodbye love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by A007, Mar 27, 2001.

  1. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How do i say goodbye to the only love you've known
    is it supposed to be a simple goodbye
    Do i just walk out of the door never look back
    keep my chin stiff and never cry

    How do i say goodbye to what is so comfortable
    do i want to stay simply because i feel safe
    Am i a leaving just because i am tired of the fight
    or has reality finally hit me in the face

    A reality that screams we won't make it
    we are breaking up because we are not soul mates
    A reality that whispers that is going to be hard
    because your heart believes loneliness is your fate

    but i still love u the heart continues to say
    but i still need u the mind continues to race
    but i still want u the body continues to feind
    but i still want to leave because u are still mean

    do i stay or do i go over and over in my head
    it echoes and repeats as my love begins deminish
    i don't know where love will lead
    but i know the love in this relationship is finished

    and even though i know it to be completely true
    it still haunts my thoughts and i am not sure why
    but i really do still love u
    and it is extremely hard to say goodbye........

    GOODBYE
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is hard to say goodbye...
    I felt your heart in this piece A007.
    Just remember tha although you lost one love,
    there is new love out there, waiting for you to find it.

    Very Beautiful A, very beautiful......
     
  3. 8th wonder

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    that was so heartfelt............

    Dayumm.... Takes me back to a piece I wrote "moving on". Kinda like being stuck between yesterday and today... Stand your ground and know that love will meet you there....

    8th!
     
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    beautiful flow A007

    thank you for sharing this

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime saying goodbye can be a sweet hello
    but often hard to let go of that love u feel............
     
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    This is really heart felt and beautifully written.
    Much Luv
     
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