Black Poetry : Goodbye Little girl

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The little girl in me.....

    wants to roll in the field,
    play ball with my cousins,
    Wrestle with the fellas,
    eat donuts by the dozens,

    While the women....

    wants to expericence college
    Wants to be her own "man"
    Break from her parents
    Be the best women she can...

    That little girl has faded away...
    She's been lingering still
    At times when I wanted to ball up and cry
    She's been at my will

    By the women in me has
    been standing by my side
    Telling me to be strong
    That the Lord will provide

    Tomorrow I will be grown..
    But what If I ain't ready for the real world
    What if I still want my childhood?
    What if I still want to be Daddy's Girl?

    I still got the suitcase ready....
    To pack who I used to be away...
    It's just an entrance of womanhood
    That starts on Tuesday
     
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    SwT i really like how you penned this the little girl will always be there. she will be there to remind you of the innocence days. as you step out into this world of craziness.
     
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    Thank you whisper:)
     
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    I feel ya girl, i dont want to grow up and want to all at the same time...
     
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    ah my sistah Swt
    this is indeed
    a special flow
    truly wonderful
    feeling the joy
    you will be you
    and much more
    so wonderful
    watching you
    grow
    much love to you
    Peace
     
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    Girl I am so feelin this....I remember that crossroad from times past. Blessings on your journey, my friend.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa!!! tyte flow it was on point
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody:)
     
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    nice flow...
    i truely understand
    this road....much love lil sis
     
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    this is so touching.........

    takes a sister back in time...for real

    wow...this was nice
     
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