Black Poetry : GOODBYE(letter to a former Love)

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll cease and decist
    no longer persist
    virtually non-exist
    from realms of thought and vision
    where once placed
    no name
    taste
    face
    or space
    not even remnants of
    what was
    and to some
    still is
    if you'd like to see me
    this lifetime or next
    close your eyes tight
    say my name twice
    and i'll be in THAT smile
    remembrance of then
    reflected in NOW...
     
  2. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    from my heart...

    I thank you!!! ya boi D loses 'em left and right...LOL!

    LOVE&RESPECT
    Dave
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN

    U SAID THIS WIT GREAT PRIDE AND REAL TRUE LOVE
    YA WAS ALL ON POINT HERE........SPEAKETH DEM WORDS :toast:
     
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    Never gonna say goodbye

    Well done--a nice flow and a sweet sentiment--Amun-Ra

    :confused: Is Religion to blame for the WTC tradgedy? Stop past and read a different view of the World Trade Center Crisis--http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=4105
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dyme, dear poet, this piece is simply a lovely piece written. keep on scribin'.
     
  6. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$~ A brutha had to move on and this gave me much needed closure.

    Amun-Ra~ Glad you could feel da flow.

    LISTERSCRIBIN'~ it pleases me to know u think so :)

    LOVE&RESPECT to you ALL! even those who didn't or couldn't find the words to reply but still took the time to read.

    DP2G
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling

    this so strong, Dyme!

    " if you'd like to see me
    this lifetime or next
    close your eyes tight
    say my name twice
    and i'll be in THAT smile
    remembrance of then
    reflected in NOW..."



    ...reading you in a different light! Love this. Thank you,

    a
     
  8. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is cool.

    way cool. I'll take a goodbye like this anytime. Your words here flow in an unceasing rythm. Nice work.

    JAH Bless.
     
  9. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce...YeshuJah

    A~ i'm seeing, and living life in a different light...different perspective, different eyes...

    and u are soo welcome...thanks for reading me!

    Jah~ thank you so much.

    LOVE&RESPECT to you both.

    DP2G
     
  10. Poetic Sol'Ja

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    wow babe

    wow D that was deep i liked it i realy thought hat was nice D this is LL you know if u dont its MISTA yeah well i liked i alot
    " if you'd like to see me
    this lifetime or next
    close your eyes tight
    say my name twice
    and i'll be in THAT smile
    remembrance of then
    reflected in NOW..."

    wow!
     
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