Black Poetry : Good Wit' Words

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Apr 11, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every rhyme that we write
    Is a robust wine
    Creating space
    Between the sheets
    Sublime...
    Our words relate
    That age old taste
    I'm good wit' words
    You're filled with hate

    Now I ain't hating
    For the sake of piss
    We're shaking it
    For cleanliness ~
    Time in a bottle
    Is just wasting this
    The line at the bottom?

    Be a sweet caress!

    You're good wit' words
    That's what I heard
    A brother and sister
    That's in the word
    Smooth as butter
    Like the flight of Bird

    A Love Supreme
    In a word,
    Will please!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :thanks:
    aka 1poetsought copyright 2004
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    There is no doubt about it poet,
    You are definately good with words!
    Even better yet,
    I thought your words were Great!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with Purplemoons, keep molding those words to express what's true.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin ya flows....
    twisting and laying
    str8 to the point
    nice flow Poet
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw brothah, where you been? I lubs your poetry! :grouphug:
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are all so very good wit' words

    Much love
     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good wit words
    Good wit expressing thoughts
    I like this
    Great scribe!



    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks:a million!
     
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