Black Poetry : Good Secs (tha lighter side of me)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Muse, Aug 26, 2004.

  1. Muse

    Muse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tired of hearin' bout the thangs
    that only you can do in bed.
    An Adonis...
    Mandingo warrior...
    Senor Amor.
    Promised hours of pure bliss
    and "ooh shoot can't wait for this".
    Got my mind swayin' from your verbal foreplay.
    Trippin...from imagining you and me,
    well just you
    Cause it was you who said we'd be
    LOVING
    FOR
    HOURS.
    But when this act of "love" went down,
    There were no divine intervals and
    I was clearly perplexed
    cause in contradiction to yo' yapping
    I recieved just "GOOD SECS".
    What happened to the sex
    or love session
    maybe romance
    or the humpin'?
    What happened to anything better than this?
    Maybe it was lost in the 29 seconds
    that began our act.
    Removal of my clothes,
    words in abundance...
    but no testes to back them up.
    No soft and lovely kisses
    instead your hard ignorant pecks
    just another attribute of your "GOOD SECS".
    I see...
    you can’t work the middle
    cause yo' HEART to little.
    You are not loving me and you are losing me.
    Add 30 seconds to the 29
    and we got 59 seconds of pure unadulterated...
    NOTHING!
    Grunts
    Moans and groans
    lovely pleasure on your behalf.
    You busted
    I'm disgusted
    and surely utterly vexed
    a result of 59 of your "GOOD SECS".


    lol

    -Muse :D
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow 59 secs and correct
    this was hottttttttttttt!!!!!!
    love ya flava here MUSE
     
  3. Muse

    Muse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wink: Thank ya sir rich. i laugh whenever I read this piece.
     
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    Just to think, you could've had a v8. The word play here...Good Secs...This was a funny piece. Thank you for this.
     
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    Lmao.......59? smh

    somone got a raw deal.... :deal: ​
     
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    :lol: Oh my girl...
    I love the concept...
    and play on words...
    You broke it down poet!

    This was so clever...Loved it!

    Paying the love forward! :wink:
    ~~Sage~~
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Muse

    I don't mean to :lol: at your "Good Secs" experience, but :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    :thanks: for sharing your life's experiences with us. :D

    :toast:
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: Oh my goodnesss!!!! I laughed and laughed. Not just at you sister, but with you. Girl, ain't this the worst?????? I loved this flow. It is wearing the crown. Like I always say, "Don't talk me to death. Show and prove."
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH MY MY MY :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
    :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    now sista smh LOLLLL at first i was like
    and i said...ok ok I can dig it...
    then when the ...
    :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh:
    :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh:
    :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh:
    Oh sista I KNOW you sent his tired butt home
    :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh: :lol: :laugh:
    give him da :spank: :hammer: and MOVE ON :lol:

    it was humorous and yet STILL a great write :)
     
  10. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DIVA YOU LAID THE ONE DOWN, OHMYGOSH HAD ME LAUGH FOR A LONG TIME. YEP SIS YOU REPRESENTED REAL GOOD. KEEP THIS GIRL. I LOVED THE WORD PLAY. LOL, HA HA HA Much love girl.

    Poetic_Diva
     
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