Poetry Critiques : Good Mourning (MONDAY)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Jan 23, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I see them
    Pencil pushers
    Overtime workers
    And penny pinchers
    Cofee drinkers
    Mocha Lattes
    And cappacinnos
    Tank fillers
    Newspaper readers
    Horoscope lookers
    Astrology thinkers
    Rush hour traffic
    Howard stern fanatics
    Window washers
    Train riders
    Dope sellers
    Mourning Yawners
    Kids screaming
    Late for classes
    No doz takers
    Nicotine favors
    Patch weares
    Baby mommas
    Babies mommas mommas
    Kids crying
    Change the pampers
    Kick and scream
    Combing hair
    Shampoo dandruff hair
    Cold asz showers
    Cologne or Perfume
    Yes it smeels good
    Im so sleepy
    It must be Monday
    "Good Mourning"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like a monday morning wake up
    man u pen this to perfection enjoyed it
    don't change nothing
     
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    i just love how the pen flow
    causing me to wanna thro some elbows
    naw just kidding flow on tant!!!!!!!!!
    :kiss1:
     
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    Thank You Brother $$RICH$$
    Thank You Sister Nevar
    Yeah Mondays are very hard
     
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    likewise bruh ! and most welcome.
     
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    Loved it! Goin head with your bad self.
     
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