Black Poetry : Good Morning...for Penny Brunswick

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 22, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the dew is fresh
    Glistening on the grass
    Its vapor rising from the morning sun
    There you are
    Just as fresh
    Just as bright
    Smiling at me

    I feel your "Good Morning"
    Running through me
    Like streams in early spring
    Fast
    Clean
    Exhilarating
    Waking me up inside

    When you say "Good Morning"
    It is a command to the elements of life
    A call to all that will touch me
    "Be good to him"
    Thank you

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bruce

    this is so special....

    ...A call to all that will touch me
    "Be good to him"


    that is what it's all about, exactly....

    a
     
  3. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read!!!!!!!
     
  4. epiphany

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    heartbeat....

    very nicely done........

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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