Black Poetry : Good Man THERE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Dec 27, 2011.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seen around town
    Spending money on Bre
    Darkest pretty man you ever did see

    She has a good man there...
    And we are everywhere

    Wallace made his bid
    Raised up a kid
    Gave an assist
    Precious to give

    You're a good man, dad
    Did I turn out a cad

    Ladies equate ~
    Got what it takes
    When he don't break
    She's coming straight

    Being a good man there
    We'd like to try it here

    BABY xxx

    Darryl Abdu Omari
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ :1on1:
     
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    Dear Brother Poet 1poetsought,

    I've been reading this piece for hours and I'm just as lost as I can be...nevertheless...it tasted smooth going down.
    Particularly like:

    "Ladies equate ~
    Got what it takes
    When he don't break
    She's coming straight

    Being a good man there
    We'd like to try it here

    BABY xxx"
    Your number 1 thru 100 fan.

    (smile)