Black Poetry : good lovin'

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sex is fun but, i want some good lovin'
    some kissin' and huggin'
    along with some passionate rubbin'
    i'll touch you in the right places
    to make you make those cute faces
    we'll walk and talk and have a bite
    and guess what's goin' down tonight
    i still have an appetite
    and your skin is looking oh, so right
    just a taste around your waist
    i move according to your pace
    i'm turning into an animal
    a carnivorous, conniving cannibal
    you do a good job at slowing me down
    with that convincing frown
    you smile as my style adjusts
    to loving instead of just lust
    body-heat activated
    sensually saturated
    i stop and hold you tight
    as if i'm bracing to take flight
    and then i proceed to give you what you need
    you've got more than i ever wanted
    your house is never haunted
    then i penetrate
    we court, we relate, we mate
    not like mammals and reptiles
    we perform like a perfect mix between the two
    my hands control certain body parts
    as if you're the canvas for my own art
    you mathematically steer my body
    i feel like i'm in a maze
    you begin to create my rhythm
    and all my manly ways
    yet, you still play submissive
    as if you're in a daze
    how do i love that...
    let me count the ways
    I don't poke, stab, or beat it
    i caress and calmly treat it
    like the sacred womb it is
    it is your princess palace
    now come, and fill my chalice
    it's been over half an hour
    and we're still intertwined
    interlocked enter my mind
    and find something divine
    as i continue to make designs
    my masterpiece is almost done
    so, i give her a daughter
    she already has the sun
    sex is fun but, i want some good lovin'
    if we can't do this
    we can't do nothin'​
    :love:
     
  2. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    Well Now

    Sha'iyn, Sha'iyn, Sha'iyn...

    This was absolute Fiyah!:court: Wow... Don't u get me started now:peace: , u know that's my area of expertise:fyi: ... LMAO:qqb006: Shine and Keep on Poet...
     
  3. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    By The Way...

    That's my FAVORITE part...:read:
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea

    sex is much more when you can feel the love of it

    man this piece here speaks of a man


    do "you" poet

    do you

    man this was on fire
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The art of passionate love was flowing all through this piece. Posed on point, poet.
     
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    HI Sha'iyn
    Oh gosh ...*fanning*
    See you did your thing here
    Again, I love how this flow
    Got my emotion
    Working overtime.
    We all need this loving... for real...lol
    Wonderful, delightful, inspirational piece,'
    Keep it flowing please! Nice


    Peace~N~Love
     
  7. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See!!!! There you go AGAIN! Fiyah, don't even describe what you brought! I'm feeling another inspiration coming on!!!!
     
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