Black Short Stories : Good Girlz pt2

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  1. Love Child

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    I took a ill minute for pt 2 right?

    Manipulation was how Johnny became a made man in the first place. He knew how to manipulate his enemies and always come out on top. His motto was "In order to achieve ones goal and stay on top one must deceive others."
    So Paulie and his niece Tammy was a challenge Johnny welcomed with open arms. Tammy who had seen and been through a lot of things was clueless with the matter of men. Her father, who had exposed her to a lot of things in hopes of preparing his daughter for all possibilities, forgot to teach her the rules of attraction.
    Tammy had seen it all, men being killed right in front of her. Innocent people getting caught in the cross fire of a shoot out. Lives being taken over tideous reasons. No matter what the reason, Tammy was taught to take care of anything or anybody who served as a threat.
    If someone disrespected you, they had to be punished and become an example to others of what happens when someone tries to f*** with you. Tammy had all the street’s smarts as well as being academically talented.
    Still no lesson in school, or from her father, or Paulie had prepared her for the upcoming events that would change her life for ever.
    After dinner Johnny drove them to a night club smack down in the middle of the Bronx. He didn’t give a [email protected] if it was out of his boundaries. There was no force in the world that could tell him where he could and couldn’t go.
    He pulled up in front and handed the valet driver the key’s to his Porsche and a hundred dollar tip to take extra special care with his baby.
    He escorted Tammy pass the long line and walked up to the bouncers. They stood like two big black apes. Johnny nodded his head and they stepped aside letting him in. Tammy was awed again with how much clout Johnny had.
    She didn’t know that the club was owned by one of Johnny’s business associate, Rico. Johnny laundered money through Rico’s club and though they couldn’t stand each other they always showed each other respect. Johnny walked over to a vacant candle lit table and pulled out Tammy’s chair.
    Rico looked down from his one sided mirror window in his office. “Look at this f***** grease ball” said Rico to his right hand man Blink. “I know that mutha f*** thinks he can show up any time he wants, you should let me clap his *** right now.” said Blink pointing his finger like a gun at Johnny. “Naw that bastard will get his when the time is right” said Rico looking away with frustration.
    He hated having ties with Johnny, but he owed him one. Johnny had gotten him out of a sticky situation with some mobster’s from Queen’s. Rico was appreciated but didn’t expect his payback would be allowing Johnny to launder money through his club. Rico was already in it deep with some drug dealers now he had the Italian mob on his ***.
    A waiter came over with Johnny’s regular a bottle of Dom Perigon. He set two flute glasses on the table and poured Johnny and Tammy a glass. Johnny pulled out another bill and slipped it to the waiter. He smiled and left them alone.
    “So Tammy are you enjoying yourself I thought this might be your scene.” Tammy stopped dancing to the loud hip hop music that was blazing through the speakers.
    “Why, because I’m half black you automatically thought I like rap music, for your information I like all kinds of music okay.” Johnny smiled at her feistiness and sipped his champagne.
    Tammy was turning him on with her independent attitude, he had to respect that. Most broads didn’t have sense to stand up to him and which led him to disrespect them even more. Tammy would definitely be a challenge.
    After a few more glasses Tammy was feeling tipsy. She never drank alcohol often, only on special occasions, if Paulie allowed. When G-Unit’s song came on Tammy felt the urge to dance. “Come on you have to dance with me” she yelled over the loud music
    “Oh naw I don’t dance, well not to this s*** at least.” “Oh please come on” pleaded Tammy “No you go ahead I’ll watch from here.” “Fine” Tammy got up and headed to the dance floor that was flooded with men and women shaking and popping whatever they could. Tammy found a spot in the middle and let the music guide her body.
    Women stared with jealously at Tammy’s 5’5 petite body frame and fair skin. She closed her eyes and danced by herself seductively. Johnny stared at her from their table while puffing on a oolie.
    Tammy was surprised when she felt someone come from behind and wrap their arms around her waist. She stopped and turned around. She stared up at tall black @$$ dude with dreads. She tried to push him away but he was persistent.
    “Come on mami what’s wrong, you never had no nine inch black d*** I know your little white boyfriend ain’t hitting it right.” Tammy was disgusted and turned around to walk away. “Come here girl you hear me talking to you” said the dude with dreads grabbing Tammy by her shoulder. “Get the f*** off of me” yelled Tammy. “B**** I’ll slap the s*** out of you” said the dude with dreads
    “B**** who you calling a b****?” Tammy’s ill temper took over her body causing her to slap dude straight across his face. He was shocked and raised his arm to execute a massive blow to Tammy.
    He was caught dead in his tracks with a blow from behind. Johnny who had been watching the whole incident came up from behind dude with a punch to his neck. Dude stumbled forward and Johnny began punching until he broke him down.
    The crowd gathered in a circle watching Johnny punch and stomp the s*** out of the dude. After it looked like dude was unconscious Tammy grabbed at Johnny. “Johnny stop you’re going to kill him.”
    Johnny pushed Tammy off of him causing her to stumble into the crowd and then he returned to his victim.
    Rico had walkie talkie his bouncers to hold their position, he enjoyed watching Johnny beat the s*** out of some n**** twice his size. Tammy started screaming at him to stop. “Johnny please stop!”
    Johnny gave the dude one more kick in the head then spat on him. He looked around to see if anyone else wanted some, and adjusted his leather jacket back on him. He looked at Tammy who was in tears and grabbed her hand leading her away. He exited the club and sent for his whip.
    Tammy stood by his side quiet. “You okay, huh, are you alright?” He asked grabbing her by her shoulder’s. “I’m fine” she snapped pushing him off of her.
    “You know I can handle myself, I don’t need you beating people to death for me.” Johnny just looked at her and laughed like a mad man. Tammy stared at him wondering what was so funny. “What, what is it [email protected]?” askde Tammy getting heated
    “Nothing you’re just beautiful when your angry” He approached her and touched her chin. She sucked her teeth and had to laugh too. Tammy was amazed at how Johnny managed to bring down a big *** man like that. Truth be told she was happy Johnny stepped in when he did because she didn’t feel like having her face smashed in.
    It was late when they left the club and Johnny headed to Jersey to drop Tammy off. She protested with him that she wasn’t ready to call it a night but he refused and insisted that he promised Pauile to bring her home at a decent time and in one piece.
    After driving through the gated entrance Johnny pulled up to the front entrance and walked Tammy to the door. “So Miss Scalvoni did you have good time tonight despite the little minor altercation.” She rolled her eye’s and smiled.
    “I guess so I have to say if every date with you turns out like tonight I don’t know I might have to leave you alone Mr. Vestti, I don’t think I can handle anymore of your wild escapades” said Tammy getting close to him.
    She tried to kiss him but he refused driving Tammy insane. All night she wanted to taste his lips and still a little tipsy from the club she was ready. “Goodnight Tammy I’ll call you tomorrow.” said Johnny kissing her on her forehead and headed to his car.
    “And don’t worry I promise next date will be less dramatic that is if you want to go out with me again.” he smiled and got in his car. He knew to be successful with women you had to tease them, and always leave them wanting more. That drove women crazy and they always returned curious to what would happen next.
    Tammy entered the house smiling like a school girl. She peeped in uncle Paulie’s office and found him on the phone. He signaled for her to sit and wait. “Okay alright let me know how it turns out, and Richie don’t disappoint me again.” He hanged up and smiled at his niece who’s face was glowing.
    “So how the date go, did Johnny treat my little girl right?” “Yes he was a gentleman I guess, he took me to a nice Italian restaurant in Queens then we went dancing.” Tammy decided to leave out the part about the club being in the Bronx and the fight.
    “Good I’m glad you enjoyed yourself I want the best for you Tam, you and Melissa mean a lot to me” said Paulie standing up and walking over to her. He hugged her and kissed her forehead.
    “Now go get some rest I have a big day planned for you tomorrow.” “What are you talking about, you know Saturday’s I like to visit Lanae uncle Paulie” “I know but tomorrow I was hoping you would stay in Jersey” I’m leaving town for a few days and I don’t want you running around Brooklyn while I’m gone.” “Uncle Paulie!”
    “What you can visit Lanae next weekend besides Johnny’s coming tomorrow to keep you girls busy.” “I asked him to watch over my girls until I got back okay.”
    “Alright fine but I don’t need a babysitter you know.” said Tammy standing up. “I know goodnight I’ll see you when I get back be good.” Tammy went upstairs headed for her room to call Lanae and break the news.
    Paulie called Johnny while on his way to the airport. “Hey Johnny I’m on my way to the airport, yeah I told Tammy you would be coming over tomorrow, um like around noon that should give the girls time to get up, eat, and get dressed, okay, and Johnny remember these are my little girls I’m counting on you to take care of them while I’m gone.”
    Johnny reassured Paulie not to worry and that he would guard the girls with his life. They hung up and Pauile got out the limo headed for his private jet.
    Johnny looked back at the naked body asleep in his bed. “Come on get up you have to leave.” “What, what are talking about baby” said the woman while stroking his back. Johnny arched his back away from her.
    “Come on I have plans for tomorrow I need to get some sleep Sal will drop you off.” Johnny stood up and picked up his jeans off the floor. He pulled out seven bills from the pocket and threw it the woman.
    “F*** you Johnny” she said getting up looking for all her belongings. He watched and waited for her to get dressed. She grabbed the money that was scattered on the bed. She tried to kiss him but he stopped her and pushed her out his room slamming the door in her face.
    She kicked the door and cursed at him. Johnny was tempted to open the door and lay her out with one blow but decided to let it slide. He went to bed thinking about how Pauile was making things for his plans a lot easier then he expected.
    He didn’t like the idea of being asked to babysit but he would use it to his advantage. He was prepared to get his plan in action and this weekended was the perfect opportunity.
    Tammy changed into her sleeping clothes climbed in bed and called Lanae. “Hello” answered Lanae half asleep “Hey La La you sleeping?” “Uh yeah I was til you’re *** woke me up, what is so important that you couldn’t wait to tell me in person tomorrow?” asked La La
    “Well see that’s the problem, I’m not coming tomorrow my uncle left town and doesn’t want me running around Brooklyn while he’s gone” she said mocking Paulie.
    “**** for real, that sucks, Daisy and me planned to show your *** a good ol’ BK time too, she just got some new good s*** that fire yi-mean, it’s cool though.”
    “**** I don’t know why he’s tripping.” said Tammy bringing out her Brooklyn accent she used around her girls. “I think he knows about me seeing my moms yo” ........
    To be continued
     
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    nice story wow!!

    try to slow down on all the cussing
     
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    Sorry bout that I just get caught up in the moment but thanks for the support. I'll tone it down a bit.
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    it's a beautiful story
    and thank u for understanding
    Love child
     
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    I'm Lovin the story girl keep it up!! :spin:
     
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    I'm liking this, where is the rest of it?
     
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