Black Poetry : Good evening

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Jun 12, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good Evening

    I hope you don’t mind that
    I’ve taken the liberty of running your bath

    There’s a glass of chardonnay beside the tub
    To help you relax…after a stressful day

    Come here.

    Let me help you outta those confining things

    While you’re soaking in the tub
    I’ll finish dinner
    …set the table
    and light the candles

    Why have I done this?

    When you called…earlier
    I could hear the stress in your voice
    If given a choice between a stress-free you
    And you filled with the Blues
    I’ll do whatever I have to do
    To set you free

    Go on, now

    Let Calgon take you away
    As Luther melt the glacier hard shell
    Of today’s hell
    Surrounding your mental
    Sending them floating down the river of
    “never again”

    ahhh…you’ve finished

    What a vision of loveliness
    Let me lick…I mean
    Towel you dry {sigh}

    Did you enjoy your bath?

    I hope the wine was o’kay
    …helped to wash away every last vestige
    of pressure remaining from your day

    COZ

    Tonight just isn’t a night for thinking
    ‘bout what wuz

    Good evening

    I was thinking of you, today
    What I thought was good
    What I felt was good
    What I see is incredible

    Come

    Let me serve you
    Coz after dinner
    I wanna dine on you
    …wanna see if you taste
    as good as you did the last time
    I consumed the wine of your femininity

    Good Evening.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAYUMMMMM! BALLER .... she will go nuts after a night wit u
    coz the smooveee lustful flow of knowledge u pose is tyght..
    word the room bru !
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...Sherykah...you know we bruthaz best be treating our women like the QUEENS they are...otherwise, they may just go looking for their KINGDOM in other places.:) THANKS FOR READING.
     
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    Well hell ! :hot: look what you gone made me do
    hold up while I wipe the drool of my monitor.........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah Baller our Queenz of heart is all dat & some !!!
    i feel ya here coz i be lovin how i treat dem ....
     
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    Completely romantic..
    but after all...a real man knows a woman's worth...
    nicely done Baller..


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    b.


    well... umm... just... dayum!!!

    the imagery alone in this piece was enough to
    make me wanna call you to complain about my
    hectic week... then invite my **** self ova for
    dinner!! :lol: i'm diggin' your flow, my dear!! :)

    itsallLove, chile!!

    elayne.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man you are ballin outta control

    CoZ this was the schyt for real. you said wine, Lutha, and a hot bath, sherrie i need mo soap !!!!!!!!!!!!:)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my ****!
    Baller, this piece has just the right bit of
    EVERYTHING!

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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