Quiet Poetry Lounge : Good Enough to Please Him

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Feather, Sep 11, 2011.

  1. Feather

    Feather Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he doesn't understand me
    Im unique..
    and when he takes me
    i forget everything
    he's never on time and thats understood

    says he's a very busy man and many tasks to tend
    a couple nights he'll spend
    night fly's and I'm kissing him off in the morning
    unsure of when he'll return

    waiting for my phone to ring...like a moron

    sudden knocks at my door
    minutes of passion
    following lonely hours

    and he won't share
    his mind
    everythings a cloud of smoke
    im left wiping the tears from my eyes
    batting my hands trying to see clearly

    i fulfill him with my womanhood
    but my mind he doesn't demand
    feeling like an ostritch with my head in the sand

    Im not important to him, or what I have to say
    im telling him today
    he should find himself...
    in lust that owns him
    and has part us.

    im better than his use of me
    i deserve better
    the smoke has cleared
    and i can clearly see

    He doesn't deserve me.

    patiently in grace i await
    for fate
    to bring my love to me
    demanding
    with a passion to know

    who i am

    starting with my beautiful mind
    then my body he will get to know...

    joining our souls.
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the realization of your worth. the reality of the picture you've painted glared at me. i feel your pain. you penned this well.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The depth of your soul cry out from the pain one's feel
    the woman total worth you know is more then ya womaness but also ya mind
    mentally/spiriturally .....well felt scribe here because i know all this so well just reversed
     
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