Black Poetry : GOOD BYE

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  1. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'VE GIVEN YOU ALOT OF ME
    FOR YOU
    BEEN ALL THAT I COULD BE
    LET YOU IN THE INNER MOST PARTS TO SEE
    THE GREATEST LOVE THAT MOST MEN ENVY

    TO EVERY GAME YOU PLAY
    THERE ARE STAKES AT HAND
    BUT THE BET YOU MADE MY DEAR
    WITH MY HEART
    WILL BE YOUR LAST
    YOU TOOK ME FOR A FOOL
    BY TELLING YOUR LIES
    SO DON'T EVEN ASK THE QUESTION
    ON WHY I HAVE TO SAY GOOD BYE

    REMEMBER HOW I HELD YOUR HAND
    CAUSE YOU WAS MY WOMAN
    AND I WAS YOUR MAN
    REMEMBER OUR LOVE WAS A NATURAL HIGH
    NOW THERE IS ONLY ONE THING TO REMEMBER
    THE FACT I HAVE TO SAY GOOD BYE

    WATCH ME AS I WALK AWAY
    TO THINK YOU'LL STOP ME
    YOU'LL NEVER SEE THAT DAY
    REMEMBER THE GOOD MAN
    YOU HAD ALL THIS TIME
    CAUSE MEMORIES IS ALL YOU'LL HAVE
    YOU MESSED UP
    NOW ITS GOOD BYE!!!
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess she will soon learn that ..."YOU DON'T MISS YOUR WATER...TILL YOUR WELL RUNS DRY". How often we take anothers :heart: and :luvv: for granted, but...there's a silver lining to every cloud...and the rainbow is just a dream away.
    Many of us know, but few of us remember that..."THE DOOR SWINGS BOTH WAYS"
     
  3. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS TRUE SISTA! PEOPLE NEED TO STOP PLAYING GAMES!!!
    MUCH LOVE!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i feel u indeed can seem to know it til it's gone
    flow on poet of the week
     
  5. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS RICH!!
    YES, WE MUST OPEN OUR EYES BEFORE THE GOOD THINGS IN OUR LIFE PASS US BY.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, it happens that way sometimes, hopefully one can learn from those kinds of mistakes. Keep flowing poet of the week.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TURTLE!! TURTLE!! TURTLE!!!!!

    Poet of the WEEK yes nice drop
    feelin you on dis
    love it
    flow on......
    peace
    angel
     
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    Loved the way
    you flowed this!
    Tyte scribbin!
    You never miss
    the water til
    the well runs dry!
    Stay strong KING!
     
  9. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YES. SOMETIMES WE LOOK OVER THE IMPORTANT THING IN OUR LIFE AND END UP LOOSING THEM.
    MUCH LOVE!!!!!!!!!
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes we have to know when to say...*when*...
    very emotive scribe...
    a bridge, many of us have had to cross
    as emotive and melancholic as it is...
    sometimes an ending is a *beginning*...

    loved your flow...