Black Poetry : good bye mom

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sixfoot0, Jul 21, 2004.

  1. sixfoot0

    sixfoot0 New Member MEMBER

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    WHATS WITH THE LONG FACES?
    IVE GONE ON TO HAPPIER PLACES.
    THE TIME IVE LIVED ON THIS PLACE CALLED EARTH WAS FUN
    AT BEST
    SOME FEEL THEY HAVE LOST ME TO DEATH
    BUT MIND YOU I WEAR GODS BULLET PROOF VEST
    I WILL LIVE ON FOREVER IN YOUR HEARTS
    SO DON'T START CRY N
    BOO HOO N
    WIPE N YOUR NOSE FOR ME.
    FOR NOW I'M FREE OF CAR NOTES ,BILLS,AND TAKEN THOSE NASTY DOG ON PILLS
    KEMO THAT MADE ME WALK SLOW,
    TEENY WEENY AFRO,
    YEAH I'M TRY N TO BRING THAT STYLE BACK
    .....SO!
    ALL I ASK IS THAT YOUR REMEBER ME FOR THE FUN TIMES,
    PAUSE THE BUTTON PRESS REWIND
    THE HARDEST PART IS PUSHING START,
    IN THIS LIFE I'M HAPPY IVE MADE MY MARK
    NOW IVE MOVED ON,
    LOOK A IT AS A JOB PROMOTION,
    LOVED THE CUBICAL... BUT NOW I GOT A OFFICE WITH A VIEW
    AND FROM UP HEAR YAH ALL LOOK LIKE LITTLE ANTS.SO AGAIN I ASK

    ,WHATS WITH THE LONG FACES I'VE GONE ON TO HAPPIER PLACE
    HOLD THAT THOUGHT.....
    YES??
    UH HUH?
    OK YALL..I GOT TO RUN
    LORD SAID OFFICE MEETING, A MOTHERS JOB IS NEVER DONE.

    BY ERIC
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done here nice drop poeticly ...wow!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & bond
    welcome from above as i bless dis flow some love :toast:
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  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and welcome home...
    you came in the door swinging, very nice piece and it makes a lot of sense to me. thanks for sharing with us.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:
    welcome to destee.com
    very tight drop...i likes
    hope to read more of you...
    we will look for you again in chat as well..
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    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, I really like this. Welcome to the Destee fam.
     
  6. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Poet

    What a wonderful way to spin a loss. This was precious :wave:
     
  7. Khasm13

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    this was a touching poem...
    mom dukes will always be special...i feel that
    welcome poet to the heaviest vibe on da net
    relax man...and kick some poetry...
    one love
    khasm
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was wonderful. Such an uplifting way to view a mom's passing. It would be a mother's way, to try to ease our pain, such an insight this was. Welcome to destee.
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    loved the positive energy you brought to this piece..really lovely flow
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My own mom passed on quite a while ago, and this piece spells MOM in so many ways. Such a wonderful write.