Poets: A family friend lossed two of her sons...one in October--killed--and one three weeks ago--heart attack. I wrote this for her but haven't given it to her. I need your opinions/suggestions for improvements. she's been through so much, i just want this to be right, for her. ~~~~~~ Don't Cry, Mom... we can soar among the stars and moon don't cry mom we're here for you you raised us to be the best we can don't cry mom this was God's plan i knew you could make it ...knew you'd handle yours and mine as the sunset beyond the peak my smile was wide i've lived my time i want to thank you for my journey if not for you...i would not be i've watched you time and time again ...experienced your love and joy for me you've been the MOM that many would want you've shared your heart and soul with me ...gave me a smile to share with others a love of life that set me free my life was made wonderful because of you thank you, again, for being there raising me up making me smile showing me love and more that you care each night as you hear a whisper at your ear look to the heavens Kevin and I are here when the weight of the world seems squarely on your shoulders ...your mind is weary as satan gets bolder remember what good Christians always have to say trust in His love He'll always provide a way i know of your passion the love you have to share let it pour out show others that you care God rang loud his horn and called us both home but, don't cry Mom we didn't leave you alone God walks beside you. Forever love, Kevin and Larry.