Black Poetry : Good/Bad Wifey

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes indeed in due tyme as it set in
    but one always see the worse of it when
    the twist is on them ....
    nice scribe flow on
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely said and done..... A person only sees what they want to see.... til they feel the hurt and pain..........
    Again...... nicely said......
    Thanks Rich......
     
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    most time they can't see it til it happen to them
    and the hurt & pain is doubled for they know what
    foul things they done ......it always hit back 2 X harder
    but sometime we have to sho them so they understand
    now the true heart will forgive and build on the mistakes
    made whereas others will crumble ....i feel u on dis
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Again..... nicely put..... Thanks Rich....
     
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    Very beautiful...i loved the way this was written, so honest and pure. Yeah we tend to see things differently when the tables are turned, it the human way...and some hurts take forever to heal, some don't heal at all. much love to you.
     
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    Thank you and how right u so are.... Sometymes they don't heal at all...... That's true too.....
    Much love to you too.....
     
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    well every thought i had have been said
    nice drop indeed.....posed well
    :angel1:
     
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    Thank you, mzblkangel.........
     
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    Easier to dish it out, then take it...This was on point, liked the way you penned this.
     
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