Black Poetry : Good Advice, Chuck

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Sep 22, 2007.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my leaves are falling

    and Howard's still stalling

    why isn't he calling

    his soulmate?

    is any championship worth this appalling wait?

    is she really "Unforgettable" enough to justify him b-balling in such a heart-woken state?

    after calling their last game i suggested that listening to Natalie Cole sing "Non Dimenticar" while they debate

    past issues

    could have them recalling the very thought of using vast amounts of tissues

    to cry in

    while they tie in

    the missing pieces



    love,

    Mr. Elm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hopefully the two will unite before Mr. Elm's branches are bare. Creative concept, Howard.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY POETIC... NIcely done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome release poet
     
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    thanks guys
     
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