Black Poetry : Gone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by serenti-poet, Mar 21, 2004.

  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gone, out my life, a love that's been thrown away
    And no matter how many tears I've cried it won't make him stay.
    It won't make him come back and it won't stop the hurting
    So all I can do is lay in my bad and silently contine wanting
    Him, my lover, my soul , and my king.
    This wonderful black man who I believed completed me.
    But still...
    If I knew he would be gone
    I would've kissed him one last time
    I would've held him close to me
    To let him know he was mine
    But since I didn't know
    That he would'nt be coming back into my life
    Instead of falling in love now
    I'll stop first and then think twice.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...had to read this twice. The emotions just dripping onto the page. Emotive drop, nuff said.
     
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    Deep i relate i love the flow it was tight...

    Sad but true, i been there too he the reason why i am so sad and blue
    Only if i knew he was a cheater too but what could i do my feelings just grew.......

    Sorry i just couldn't help it..my 2 cents worth... :rolling:

    One..xxxx
     
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    love lost always stings...
    you captured the feeling well...
    keep scribe'n....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop

    Wow. This really resonates with me right now, sister. Missing someone who means so much to you has got to be the worst pain in the world. Much love to you.
     
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    Sister...it is so good to see you back on the board...


    This piece was so touching...
    and so real...
    losing love is one of the
    worst kinds of pain...
    feeling this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop here sistah u been missed
    happy to be reading u again
     
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    :grouphug: where you been?

    This was a tight drop
     
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    aww......

    jee..


    been there ..hang on sis..



    but beautifull posed serenty....

    :wave: nice to see you back...
    but not in this contition...


    Love liberty..
     
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    serenti-poet,

    Profit From and Cherish the Memories

    Cherish the beauty that each blessing brings
    Try hard to overcome life's painful stings
    Overcome all of the hurt and pain
    And live life to its fullness again
    Be fully thankful for all the blessed days
    Nothing in this life we will have always
    But if we are observant and comprehend
    Our hearts, souls and bodies will all mend
    And we will be blessed to again fulfill our needs
    For the good memories left with us are bountiful seeds
    And if we don't just throw them out
    From them new love and life will sprout.
     
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