Black Poetry : Gone Too Long

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  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I held the pillow that holds your head,
    Last night,
    When you didn't come home to me,

    You've already been gone two nights,
    Too long,
    And I don't know how much more I can take,

    Your voice on the phone,
    Not nearly the same,
    As the warmth of your loving embrace,

    The shower seemed cold,
    And ever so big,
    Without my lover to share one with,

    The house so quiet,
    As my voice rang out,
    In the rooms that were empty of you,

    You'll be home in two nights,
    Too more,
    To warm you half of the bed,

    The moment I lay my eyes,
    And hands on you,
    I wont ever want to let you go,

    I hate the days,
    That you go away,
    They stretch out with stoic slow,

    So instead I keep you in my mind,
    With fantasies,
    Until you return to my arms,
    And my kiss.


    16/10/02
    *Emma*
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    auw..emma ..

    a house is not a home......


    i feel ya sista.....
     
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    surely he will return to da waiting arm of yo sweet kiss
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liberty - thanks for reading
    Rich - he sure did, I just hate his work trips and thankfully so does he :)
     
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    emma!


    gyrl! if you don't get outta my head!! :D

    i loved this... 'cause it was somethin' i could
    most definite-ly Feel! you feel me?? :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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