Black Poetry : ...gone 'til november.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soon you’ll be leaving…
    going miles away from me
    & nobody knows…
    the pain i feel
    nobody knows…but…
    it’s as real as the limitless
    OurFuture possibilities
    that i see
    reflected back at me
    when i gaze deep
    into the depths of your
    beautiful brown eyes

    …with that in mind…
    overstand these lines—

    nobody sees inside me
    the way that you do...
    you’ve written your name
    on my soul in the
    language of infinity...
    …your essense
    irreversib-ly flows
    in&out&allaround me
    incessant-ly… giving
    brand new meaning
    to the once cliché saying:
    i’ll be missing you

    …think of me often &
    take this with you—

    nobody moves me the
    way that you do...
    & you’ve opened my heart
    to love… touched
    the deepest parts of me
    ...unlocking the doors
    of my once dormant
    “king charming” dreams
    then… setting them free
    on the wings of
    whispered wishes
    & alldaylong kisses… now…
    i am forever yourqueen

    so… ‘til november
    …remember—
    OurLove is everything… &
    i’ll be here waiting for you.

    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved.
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    But love will be back Elayne!!!

    Great piece so love-filled per usual...

    Dig, diggin', dug!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat very love u express will be back to caress ya inner beings
    til that day that hour ya heart will continue to reach out yet
    within ya mind u know and feel him ever so near......weep not
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaahhhhh.:)

    so sweet.

    parting in such great sorrow
    coz he won't be there
    when tomorrow
    turns into that day
    when he'll be on his way
    to that faraway land
    but
    understand
    he'll be back
    to kiss the inner recesses
    of your being.
    one mo' 'gain:)

    keepthefaith.
     
  5. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very moving... and as a wise lady once told me "if it was ever love, nothing and no one can alter, or destroy its flow". Keep that love light shyning...

    Saleem
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is always difficult to
    respond to poetry I regard
    as beautiful and sad.

    The sadness of his leaving
    will be overwhelmed by the
    passion of his return.

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    gq. thanks for always diggin' my work! :)
    sherrie. cute?!!... you're so funny... all the time!
    rich. thank you for takin' the time to read&reply! :)
    i.b. you're always soooo sweet to me! & i love you
    for that!! thank you for the encouragement!! :heart:
    saleem. i appreciate the "wise words" & the reply! :)
    coco. ..."the passion of his return"? hmmm... you
    said somethin' then my sister!! :D i'll definite-ly keep
    that in mind!! thank you!

    :heart: itsallLove, chirens!! :heart:
     
  8. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like thsi man is DEFINETLY worth waiting for.
    Tyte piece. Lovin your style as always gurl.
    *emma*
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This here was very sweet and if someone expressed feelings of missing me like you just did I don’t think I would be able to leave.
    lovely poem
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey GA...so when is YOUR book dropping? this is nice.
     
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