Black Poetry : Gone But Not Forgotten!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Jul 14, 2002.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eleven years of perfect bliss
    We ended sour and came back
    for a final kiss.
    Some of the love making we just
    couldn't resist.
    But, you and I know we must end
    this.

    We tried for seventeen long years
    through much confusion and wasted
    tears. I fought so hard to keep it real.
    But, that was when you couldn't or
    wouldn't feel.

    Now, you want that chance again.
    But all I can offer is to be your friend.
    Sad that what was so beautiful must
    come to an end.
    Something so sweet , has gone rotten.
    You may be gone, but never...
    FORGOTTEN!

    BJS(c)2002
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mslb

    i was all in this to the very last line. sometimes we have to make the hard decisions for all parties involved cause if it were left up to them they would just beat around the bust for antoher eleven years. Nice read




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  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    everything must change and sometimes that means love too.
    nice flow poet
     
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    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This thing we call love and it's many roads.. sometimes it is too late isn't it? Movin' on

    JAH Loves you.
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading fellow scribes!

    It's a painful reality that something that was once the source
    of so much joy is often the source of so much pain.
    But, thanks be to God, I have found Love again...
    And let me tell you , love is better the second time around!
    Even if you been there before!
    Blessings on ya house!
     
  6. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes
    bridges once crossed can never be revisted.....
    Once something is broken no matter how hard you try to fix it it always appears broken .....
    if nothing else you have your memories

    Natasha :)
     
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