Black Poetry : Gold Band

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Inque, Sep 9, 2005.

  1. Inque

    Inque Active Member MEMBER

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    You don't give a d*mn for respect,
    It's all about sex.

    You’re lookin for the next good jump,
    Tryin to find whose heat is up.
    And I see those eyes peepin me,
    But I tell you now, this girl ain't free
    My bit comes high with a price.
    Tuck it in, think twice.

    Don't try that little sweetened drawl.
    Hollerin at me, tryin to call,
    Take it forever,
    Or not at all.

    I have no time for your nonsense things
    And hey
    That's "forever", spelled like "wedding ring."

    Forget that tired I love you note.
    It's overused
    And I won't be abused,
    Because I refuse
    To be your score.

    If that's what you want, well, there's the door,
    Put it to use.

    I don't pretend to be a Saint,
    That which God only knows I ain't.
    I'm not against that body speak,
    Yeah I know it.
    It’s not a foreign dialect,
    But I need my respect.
    I’m not steppin to the beat of that old game,
    Runnin around,
    Playin.

    Oh hey,
    Don’t get it wrong.
    Lord knows I’m just a human being
    Like you,
    I get that same physical feeling.

    By the way,
    That’s "forever", spelled like "wedding ring"

    I'm not cold,
    My heart is not ice,
    But it is what it is.
    I have my price,
    And I won’t be one of your nature calls.

    Take it forever,
    Or not at all.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this drop some love

    this was tyte , smooth and on point
    look to read more of you soon as u flow and share love
    as love is given welcome to the family Inque................
     
  3. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow Inque!
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well sista you spelled it out clear, know your worth. And sounds like you certainly do. Welcome to Destee, hope to read more from you.
     
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    Earftones Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    take it forever or not at all- I loove that!!! Welcome and hope to see more
     
  6. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's Right. Excellent Write.
     
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