Black Poetry : Going Through...

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s better if the lights are dim
    It’s better if the air is quiet
    Don’t need to be disturbed
    Believe it’s nothing personal against you
    I’m tired and weary
    I’m going through

    Trials and tribulations
    Oh Lord what am I gonna do
    Help me reach the end of this road
    I’m in the middle of the struggle
    I’m going through

    Things I understand
    Things I don’t
    Things I can do something about
    Things I won’t
    Lord give me guidance
    Give me that very first clue
    I’m going up the rough side of the mountain
    I’m going through

    I’m leaning on
    Depending on
    My friend who has always been you
    Am I doing right
    Am I doing wrong
    Help me Lord
    I’m going through

    BE
    © 2002
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WONDERFUL prayer...
    thank you for sharing this...
    -7:spinstar:
     
  3. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK U FOR I BEEN GOING THROUGH AND IT'S BEEN HARD FOR ME TO PRAY .... HARD TO FIND THE WORDS U KNOW ... THANK U
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I FELT LIKE THIS PLENTY A TIMES....
    BEAUTIFUL PRAYER---FOR LORD KNOWS WHUT I BEEN GOIN' THROUGH!!!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amen...


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    :)

    Well put my sista. Keep up the good work:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Heartbeat man ............Amen !
    dis how i feel
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    and wit that said you'll be alright

    great piece poet


    DSS
     
  9. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In more ways then one, know you are not going through this alone. But the one you speak of in this poem, the Lord, will be the 'ONE' to get you through. just in that place of "quiet air" be really still and listen, the answers will be there.
     
  10. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets for feeling this piece.

    BE
     
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