Black Poetry : Going through the motions (pt.1)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticbliss, May 21, 2002.

  1. poeticbliss

    poeticbliss Member MEMBER

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    Going through the motions
    Of loving you
    Had my mind caught between sky and oceans
    Acting out each scene
    From the beginning to the end
    Your love kept me always in between
    Sometimes not knowing if I was coming or going
    Just living in your essence
    But, still hating always not knowing
    Even when time stood still
    I could feel
    The warmth of your touch
    Reassuring that yes this is love
    So, why do I feel like I’m just going the motions?

    To be continued....
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PB,

    Nicely done...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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