Black Poetry : Going through Stuff

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Going through Stuff

    I rhyme and regret joking and cigarette smoking is the major
    Cause for statistics as flaws ballistic are hung in your lungs behavior
    Change my brain destine to stem fear how can the entire economics
    Of the Western Hemisphere be based on things that bring cancer so ironic
    Look I toy with girls but can’t destroy the world unless by accident
    But computer geeks that go to hooter’s to eat can attack and dent
    Society and leave a variety of folks misled this can damage the world
    And manage to twirl heads, I flow clean while Afro sheen give perms
    I live and learn at any rate and face plenty hate and many fakes take turns
    At getting my dandruff worked up a bunch of jerk butts wanna battle
    My rhymes, but time is an illusion my mind in confusion and rattled
    I’m a thug with red wine and I love deadlines how they squeak
    When passing by and crashing a guy for not meeting it being weak
    Seeing streaks of lightning when I’m writing but naw I ain’t no freak
    Bazaare scripts among the fly while star ship hung in the sky any winner
    Recognize that this is the Enterprize rapping for fame and alert a spinner
    Like Captain James T Kirk got my phasors on stun and carry razors for
    Fun dun, life’s a stink order, now I drink water thirst has faded at the bar
    the universe was created out of a star and that was a bad move try cough
    Got mad lube for my soft voice because my vocals are local not global and off
    The hook, look its December and I can’t remember where I left thing
    Wearing deft bling I got from Christmas gifts and wanna be a stealth king
    For Santa
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    stuff we go through............like a tail spin tyte joint
     
  3. Cade Foster

    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The wording in this made it very hard to comprehend what you are tryin to say, it was just a bunch of random rhymes not containing any real substance. It seems like you're new to this, but I'm sure you'll get the hang of it soon.
     
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    HEY RICH THANKS FOR THE PROPS

    cade I'm just gonna say you have no skill and your sly remarks don't mean a thing until you can show me an example talk is so cheap but hey you don't think i believe you
     
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    Who are you to tell me whether I have skill or not? You don't have to get harsh man, I'm just being honest with you.
     
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    being honest is showing examples
     
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    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being wack is showing examples, and you've done that perfectly.
     
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    CADE you afraid in this rap parade so you chase mine and the baseline is you disgrace rhyme by crying and lying and denying you whack no true facts in the junk you speak just punk on street with no skills
     
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