Black Poetry : Going Through Stuff #2

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    Going Through Stuff #2

    I’m seeing harmony and being in the army is like the boyscouts
    Destroy routes with adult supervision the result is a collision stout
    With reality or even a strong fatality in the wrong valley no doubt
    The air is hot while I tie ropes in square knots so check me out
    Have a fast plan playing like a brass band outoors my clout soars
    Like vicious mosquitos and attack like suspicious torpedos galores
    Being boss is a critical slow race but the hospital is no place to get
    Sick and whoever see a psychiart need their head examine a threat
    Or menace to society there are dentist of all variety ready to fix
    A tooth and put the truth with novacain holder of a very lame mix
    The system has no use “hey doct I got a wisdom tooth need you to
    Pull” my Ebonics calm but like an atomic bomb the best defense
    Against this is don’t be there when my rhymes explode I’m convinced
    They’ll blind toads and leave ascinine roads through brains then sense
    With cease to exist, let my girl powder her face but outerspace
    Is no place for earthly folks with worthy quotes on a prouder pace
    Success become a wilder chase, HIP HOP is misled if all of a sudden
    It drop dead it’ll be happy music and ROCK like Charles Dutton
    Rap has raised up rhyming to a new low hard to find a true flow
    Nowadays it’s the death of autotone gone to a loco zone the solo
    Songs starting to suffer I’m not cray-z but I think JAY-Z ended
    It and like T-PAINE he blamed the alcohol and Jamie Fox agreed
    This morning had a monumental thought essentials caught my attention
    Over a cup of coffee
     
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