Black Poetry : Going on a trip.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Mar 23, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    burning inside
    tryin to make it…
    pullin my
    own tryin
    to
    do….
    Getting kick
    down to get
    back up
    Flowin
    toastin
    Trippin
    just a
    fightin…..
    Tossin
    turnin
    Wishin
    hopin….
    Salty tears run….
    Singin my prayers
    looking for
    a miracle
    thinkin
    hurtin
    sufferin
    dyin inside
    I cry loud and clear…
    Still in line …
    sweet love
    Something to cherish
    Ya know something
    to call my own
    Tryin to
    come together….
    Pickin up pieces
    tryin to deal…
    don’t want
    no fancy house
    or car
    don’t need a hefty
    bank account…
    just want the
    emptiness to go away
    fly away loneliness
    just fly
    and watch this
    rose form and glow
    swing in da wind
    and bud to a perfect
    mold….bloom
    just bloom….
    Tryin to bring
    it back together….
    And losing my
    soul my strength
    But hell holding on…
    I cant stop now
    I din got this far…..
    Ya know…..
    I
    Am to far
    to stop now
    so I am going to….
    Just keep on keeping​
     
  2. gempis

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    stumblin on
    careenin sometimes
    don't know if I'm doin this right
    this thing called life
    nobody told me it was
    supposed to hurt this much
    or be so hard
    why
    I don't know
    don't wanna try to
    but yes
    I'm gonna keep goin
    too

    Much love, sis, much love. :grouphug:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowing from my
    Mental
    About to explode…
    Wonderin
    just trippin
    Feelin and
    just…..
    Hurtin
    See never knew it
    would be this hard…
    paying the bills
    raising kids…
    glad the house is mine….
    struggling and
    feelin the blues…..
    about to explode
    screamin yellin
    stompin my feet
    but hell I am dealing
    keep on keeping….​
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feel ya

    and on my sister you shall go....
    *here to share the struggle*
    dang gempis..tyte scribbin az well...yall gonna make me cry :cry:

    Nita :heart:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis thanks for the flow
    and ya gotta keep on keepin
    :thanks: :grouphug:

    nita mae :thanks: support and all
    is great means alot my sista

    peace
    Angel
     
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    re: hi

    good-afternoon mzblkangel ,


    nice of you to post a new piece...


    READ BELOW:



    well sister what is there for me to SAY? indeed this is a MASTERPIECE as i do agree with my fellow poets... one can see/tel/ that you pour out your soul when it comes to writing... i could sit for days, and just read over your work...


    keep the ink flowing... have a nice day...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  7. rasheed

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    mzblkangel,
    such a strong expression of will and tenacity, great poem......
    and encouragement to self and others to keep up the good fight.....

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    well done sistah....I was sho nuff feelin' this.....sho nuff....tyte flow......madd deep....props given with a pick of kool-aid.
     
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    thanks for the love fam
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    this a trip that has me in a cage
    i feel u and know it so well but the
    greatness is we keep going life can
    be a rude awaking
     
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