Quiet Poetry Lounge : Going back

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, May 31, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Into a define journey
    my mind wonders
    seeking the joy
    i once felt when
    my heart was filled
    with loveones and
    how we grew to a
    onesome
    on this path i cross
    so many more friendz
    family and great
    compassion weaving
    into a glisting rapture
    i feel the movement
    upward into the walks
    of this journey by strong
    will & grace
    looking ova the walk
    into where we started
    and peeping at where we
    going the river is the guide
    and my heart is the comfort
    zone my soul is the shelter
    so i look back at my family
    and think .....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And you think to a time
    When scribes and poets
    were a wholesome family sublime
    where folk leaned on each other
    when they felt low
    And sincerely applauded one another
    during a positive flow
    While in your realm you'd feel at home
    where you could hang your hat.
    And shouldn't have to watch your back,
    cause real family don't play each other like that.
    A family of some of the most knowledgeable
    and gifted nubian folk around
    fostering old school
    while breaking new ground
    With hope for the future, you head for
    the river, to the path of peace in the valley
    Hopefully when you look back you will see
    Not only the past, but a new horizon
    featuring a rainbow of lights uniting in love
    sometimes, you have to just give it
    to the One above
    and trust it will happen
    as you look back at your family
    and think....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed looking back to the days
    and peepin at what's ahead
    Thank u sistah
     
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    You're welcome. Wasn't sure if you were looking for a flow, but I flowed with it anyway....
     
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    indded a journey
    worth lookin at
    nice one Rich
     
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    thank u angel
    yes sometime we all take that trip back
     
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