Black Poetry : goes around

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jun 7, 2009.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Finding measure in qualities that don't appear tangible. Capturing qualities of speech, ethic, morals, and thought with seconds to spare. Time holding onto busy, and her. Questioning before me, during , most importantly now- tomoro"s foundation rest on todays observations of yesterdays mistakes. Stuck between connection and linkage. Simplicity within sin. Complec love. Caring with purity.new ways. the act to begin. Teaching volumes on life. Passion in words left unspoke, and purpose in the words written. Visuals drawn to perfection. Thoughts never cease. Cicular motions, introverted feeling of loving self more than you. Protecting fortress, yet pawn,spark flame, spit fire, write faith. Live dreams. Something is here, but what is gone? Street walker, slow pace, fast talker, great listener, son, daughter. Linkage missing. Intellectualy keeps me craving. Able and willing. Creative since the begining. Hour glass of patience. More questions than it takes, thought never paid, predicting why it started, before its all gone.
     
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    'Felt like a stream of consciousness type of prose to me.

    Let it flow. Cleanse. Heal. Renew.
     
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    daroc

    Interesting format.

    Alone with your thoughts for the meaning of why.

    Very nice poet.

    :toast:
     
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