Black Poetry : God's trying to tell you something

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  1. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They all had the look
    Of dis-approval
    Laced on the inside of there
    Expressions

    (Pleading face)


    The smell was way too much
    To handle
    He was too much to handle

    Then the window opened
    Someone got on and then it changed

    It’s because I have been raped
    Three times is why I can’t connect to self-
    Sucking dick at six years old is what allows me to disconnect
    I like sex but every lover becomes the
    RAPPIST

    What **** where you thinking
    Try to get you grown mans dick
    In the mouth of a six year old

    I am just so hurt I can’t see the light
    (Standing still)
    I need to find positive affirmations

    I need instructions on how to purge my inner
    Soul
    I need words of wisdom from unsuspecting Guru’s
    I need books on how to find me from sensation to painful intimidation
    I need to find touch in the warm place called

    Her

    Love

    Moving to the rhythm of me
    I find the girly-girl she has always lived
    Here just did not know my address

    I looking for my piece of mind

    Peace came when God lifted his hand
    Above my head and blessed me with
    Love

    Thumps of blood pumped inside
    Freshly lotion-ed skin touched by
    Affirmations from God

    Raindrops
    Dangling from the branch of an
    Almond tree in the middle of my soul

    Reclaiming me with every
    Touch of earth

    God’s on your side
    (Trying to tell you something)
    God’s on your side
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek: this piece....can I snap my fingas?
    flow on poet:wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another sweet creation poetess
    lovin it
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice sistah...u had me into this, if this happened to u, i hope u heal soon..may god bless,
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister...

    He is truly a "Deliverer"...

    This was such an emotionally stirring
    and spiritually awakening piece...

    Continue Sister...

    Your voice...is one that echos for days...


    Love your work!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This story was just, heinous. In God there is everything, even in the most horrible of situations. As painful as this is, this was crafted so well.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!! i would love to hear you read this, this is excellent. God bless you
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel empathy for the horror that begat this work; respect for the talent it took to craft it; and love to you for your continued evolvment as a human being. Much peace, love and strength for all time.
     
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