Poetry Critiques : GOD'S POET

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  1. WIZDOM4MILES

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    God is a poet the sad thing is no one knows it
    who else could inspire a book that would touch hearts & change lives-
    but a poet

    Christ Jesus was a poet the sermon on the mount will show it
    he started his speech with the beattitudes- 9 stanzas all begining with happy is the man.. Yes Christ was a poet and you know it

    The angels are poets they are beings created for spoken word
    Revelation said they they fly in mid-heaven with everlasting good news to declare say what you want but i swear
    the angels are poets

    Just look at the bible its a book of poetry
    with the ten commandments God said:
    "thou shall not kill
    thou shall not steal
    thou shall not lie
    if you do u will die"
    that is poetry

    The bible is poetry to the tounge just look at the song that King Solomon sung
    he spoke of the shulimite madien and said her body was as a palm tree and her breast were like dates
    that sounds like poetry to me the last i checked that was a metaphor and a simile

    Dont act like you never recited the Lord's Prayer or the 23rd Psalm that is Poetry from the heart, the scriptures are poetry from the start from Genesis 1to Revelation 22, the bible is poetry through and through, a voulume of spoken word broken into 66 books, scripture is song with verses and hooks

    I am a son of God and I am a Poet. I speak, flow, rhyme, write, and MC in the name of God, in the likeness of Christ, in imitation of Angels.
    God is a poet and you know it, you are a poet and dont be afraid to show it
     
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    welcome to destee.com honest critique
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome to the family as i bless this piece

    very nice drop , just uniform it a little better
    but over all this piece was on point
     
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