Black Poetry : Goddess

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    her voice was vemon,
    she need to see if she could still spit slits in
    wrists and make mynds bleed maddness from her words.
    Though they slipped from her fingers somehow her brain
    bent over backwards trying to live again, trying to love again,

    But life was mean to her.
    So she would just step into her "fix"
    popping pills and still feeling like recycled **** in the morning,
    She was a yoga fanatic, "Chi centered",
    drug addicked, God fearing,
    muslim-jew-buddist-catholic-Goddess,
    that made the world go round

    But she still wasn't happy,
    so she had to wait alittle longer for her "Savior"
    to come, and take away her pain...
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    wassup all, have'nt been here in a while, just droppin by, hope you like it....

    :Heart:
    -story
     
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    :spinstar: :spinstar: I liked this lil Sis :spinstar: :spinstar:

    Glad you came in and gave us some flavor of your story! :uzi:
     
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    Nice drop :jawdrop:
     
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    Seems like she had too many other Gods before the true one. Still loving the depths of your drops the story. Great to read you again.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow here i like
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone, glad you liked it...
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