Black Poetry : Goddess

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One woman whose form is beyond description

    CAuses skips of the heart and mental affiction

    A zombie am I dreaming of her face

    She is a goddess of a long ago race

    I am a worshiper who praises her name

    She is my new religion and God is to blame

    For he has chosen to vist in her earth bound flesh

    Yet her spirt soars above the highest eagles nest


    CO.2002MRKS


    FOr those who have ever been enraptured
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe ...........felt it too
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankx..we've all been there..I was reminising (can't spell -owell, but "Ican rhyme
     
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    Wow! Blackthunder.........this was unbelievably smooth!

    I loved it! Encore! Encore!

    Much luv,
    Angelic
     
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    this was a wonderful piece bro keep on,keepin on
     
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    bee-you-tee-ful! can i beg for more? :flirt:
     
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    I like.....
    real smooth
     
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    Smooth seems to fit this scribe very VERY well :)
     
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    smooth to the nth power:)
     
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