Black Poetry : Goddess

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i write scribes that
    bless ur eyes,
    and ears,
    make your fears
    vanish.....
    into oblivion......

    i anoint streams of
    rivers of tears that
    heavily fall through
    the ancient years....

    i am......external........
    i am......internal.........

    i am in the
    whispering wind
    that calls your name
    softly,sweetly,scandilously.......

    the deaf can hear me
    the blind see me
    tyme remembers....
    the beauti.....of me....
    i open your spirit so that
    you to can see.......your.......GODDESS


    from your eternal GODDESS.......enjoy ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful flow
    of Goddess u know
    dis was a lovely show
    i pose a heart
    unto ur mind
    sweet soft lovin
    and devine
    gentle caresses
    arms of comfort
    move like light
    into da night
    i am da warm breeze that brisk ya face
    i am the love taken place
    my soul is freely open in flyte
    i see da tyme is right
    i am the glist sparkle in ya eye
    i am da mesmerized motion
    flow on loving ya notion
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK U $$RICH$$ THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL.
    LOVIN THE EXPRESSION...
     
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    Hey story
    it is wonderful how you use the sense
    nice flow
    Peace
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi the_story,

    This is a wonderfully expressed piece!!

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey thanxs for replying fam,im happy u took the time
    out to look at my work
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes!
    i'm feeling the power of your grace
    like the rays
    of sunlight across my face
    boo you sholl know how to make a place
    in my :heart:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks playwitit P.I.M.P, GLAD u enjoyed
     
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    i like your vantage point on this piece...
    tyte...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks khasm much love
     
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