Black Poetry : goddess to me [4everluv]

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i fantasizaed about models shaped like bottles ooh-wee!
    i fell in love with a stripper who would take my dollars and flee

    i've learned to be careful and honest as i can be
    she said she would'nt lie that's what she promised to me

    to be modest, she told the truth but, something bothered me
    she was the type to be home a quarter after three

    i denied and tried not to listen when they gossiped to me
    found out i was'nt the only one in her apple bottom jeans

    money became the motivation i needed lots of cheese
    stayin' out of the way of crooked cops and police

    life is a female dog, her jaws lock on and squeeze
    and she'll shake until you bleed and beg out please!

    the pain of heartbreak exceeds human psychology
    then i met you babe, and you smiled at me

    beautiful, golden, nubian with a college degree
    pretty round brown gluteus gots to be a dream

    keeper of my milk and honey, silk and linen things
    made my days sunny said my money was obselete

    i behaved like a naughty prince but, she made me a king
    i used to want a princess bride or possibly a queen

    i fantasized about models shaped like bottles ooh-wee!
    but, you sound like a goddess to me

    i see you
     
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    :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush:

    Sha'iyn:
    Now why you got me all blushing and stuff.
    How terribly sweet this is. I am too flattered and touched.
    Saying thank you does't seem to be appropriate enough.
    I hope this :) on my face can describe the pleasant
    rush your words made feel, I appreciate your thoughtfulness
    so very much.
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you 4el

    so, you're a southern girl. i'm in alabama just thought i'd show you some luv. you seem like a big, fine woman with a lot on her mind. do me a favor and enjoy yourself today.

    your lil' poet,
    Shuga Shane:spinn:
     
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    very nicely compose'd to that sweet mixture of love
     
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    Quite a sweet scribe, and I see that 4ever luvs and appreciates this lovely write. Enjoying your flows, poet.
     
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