Black Poetry : God was not ready for another angel

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She was almost taken
    from me to become an
    angel I had not wanted yet

    I was not ready to stop
    holding her

    or watching the halo that resides
    over her head already

    wings are blessed but her
    arms I was not ready to miss

    a head on collision almost
    left an incision in my soul
    that would've remained
    an unfilled void

    that echoed nothing but
    pain

    ...............................................

    God was not ready for another angel
    and for that I am thankful for...
    for he saved me shed tears
    and spared me another day to
    tell her
    I LOVE YOU.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed

    God only calls us when he wants us to come home. This was an attention grabber. Hope your special someone is doing fine and recovering well.



    One
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GOD IS GOOD

    SURELY HE KNOWS ALL AND WHATS BEST
    PRAYING AND WISHING YOURS BE STRONG
    AND WELL ...............NICE TO SAY I LOVE U
    MAN U TOUCHED MY HEART WIT DIS ONE BIG TIME.
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blakverb, Blakverb, Blakverb

    This poem read like a small romantic novel with a beautiful ending. So many emotions come into play here, among the gratefulness of the words.

    Thank you so much for sharing.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I try ya'll I try.

    thank you :)

    verb
    blak
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    my twin,

    your pen rings true today as these words speak dear to the love that encompasses your thoughts. Some don't know how much they love another until they experience the thought that they may lose them. This is not you for your words carry truth well embedded in your heart since the first day of life...

    i am humbled by this piece for i lost one dear to me before i could tell them what my heart was speaking. It has been many years but the pain revisits once in a while...

    thanks for the healing...
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twin,

    I was almost at the bottom of the barrell yet God blessed she and I. And if this has helped you any, brother you know your welcome. thank for the reply, they are appreciated.

    blak
     
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