Black Poetry : God, the Poet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Oct 16, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My pen speaks,
    What my spirit leaks,
    As the broken, fragmented,
    Lines appear to me to be,
    Disjointed, but as they flow,
    In another’s ear and stays there,
    They become anointed,
    And I then become appointed,
    As the one to bring to you,
    What my spirit heard,
    In that realm,
    Also known as His Word.
    Him being the best poet on earth,
    The source of conception,
    Of the gift buried deep within,
    Long before my birth.
    Knower of the depths of all truths,
    And depths of fallacies,
    Creator of all lovers’ paradise,
    Crusher of all fantasies,
    Because His words are life.
    His words lift off the pages,
    And are turned into weaponry,
    To war in the heavenlies,
    And pull down strongholds,
    And principalities,
    I become bold
    As I read His scribe,
    Knowing that its power,
    Will never weaken or pass away,
    Even to the ends of time,
    And even then this Poet,
    Will have the last say…

    I admire You….
    As I become engulfed,
    In Your write,
    As it brings light,
    To my darkened view…
    Your written Word,
    Spoken…have you heard?
    Help me as I learn to flow with it,
    With You,
    God, the Poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Amen .......the grace of he the creator
    with scripts and scribes to live by
    tyte write
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very beautiful, Chastity.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    absolutley beautiful.......i dont even know what else to say but please stay using Gods gift that he gave you......please......


    nice read.... :welldone:
     
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    There's no way around this poet, the concept of this piece alone was awesome, God, the original poet. And then the way you flowed with this idea, making God's aura float in your rhyme schemes and phrases of strength...wow...This was fantastic!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God, the 1st Poet having the last word!

    Chasity, your faith makes for a beautiful testimony, as God, is our witness.
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your love family.... :grouphug: I hope this featured Poet will become a universal inspiration in all of your hearts :hearts1:





    I can feel you, feeling me..........don't stop :roll:
     
  8. peach_so_sweet

    peach_so_sweet Active Member MEMBER

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    That was a very beauitful poem! :tweety: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: undefinedundefinedundefined
     
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    this I like
     
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