Black Poetry : God Spoke to me

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God spoke to me

    He looked at me
    with pain in his eyes
    Suffering like the word of god
    Has left him
    And the angels that use to
    surround his side
    Let him get devoured
    By the demons of his subconsiousness

    He cried out loud
    like no man
    Has ever cried before
    And as he cried he stuck
    A syringe into his arm
    And as he released the restraint
    That restricted the blood flow
    Of his veins, he began to plead
    And pray out loud to god
    And asked him
    Why have thou forsaken me?
    Where have you been when I needed you?

    God replayed and said
    I have not forsaken you
    I have been there all along
    You just stopped believing in me
    And with the voice of God
    The man was in shock
    The power of god’s voice
    Was over powering

    And as the monkey in his veins
    Reached his brain
    His body started to go into convolutions
    And god told him
    Look at what you are doing to yourself
    And how you abuse the image
    Of my sweetest creation
    And the man replayed with
    I just can’t take this anymore
    There is to much pain within my life
    And as the tears in his eyes
    Began to role down his face
    Gods hand reached out to him
    And wiped away his tears

    My son, if you want the glory
    Of my embrace
    You first have to respect
    And love yourself
    And then ask me into your life

    The man replayed with
    I have prayed and prayed
    Yet you still have not come forth
    So I started to push this juice
    In to my veins hoping that it will
    Take the pain suffering away

    God replayed with
    But have you asked me into your heart
    And the man replayed and asked
    God, please enter my life
    And fill my heart with your glory
    I can not bare this pain and struggle
    With you not with me any more

    And as the man came down of his high
    Again he looked at me
    And said
    Will you pray with me?
    I reacted sacredly
    Wondered what he really meant
    So he grabbed my hand
    And started to pray

    I started to pull away
    But something inside of me
    wouldn’t let me
    Something told me to stay and pray
    Something about this man
    made me feel at ease
    And I came to the conclusion
    That I myself am not right
    And as we stood there, praying
    With our hands interlocked
    God spoke to me
    And I was mesmerized
    By the power of gods voice
    It Made me feel
    A love I never felt before
    I reacted with a startle
    And I jumped

    And as we came to the end
    of the prayer
    I looked at the man again
    And as he uttered
    his last words of the prayer
    He began to grow wings
    And said to me
    Worry not my child
    for god
    Has a plan for you​
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was wonderfully written...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes !!!! speak on flow on let da word be heard
    this was awesomely written
     
  4. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appriciate the love.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Defiantson
    You are one powerful Poet
    Loved the battle love
    The way you embrace God
    On this one-Much Love Poet
    This made me look twice-for real
     
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    I like "God Spoke To Me" very much.
     
  7. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks all, like I said you all are my inspiration
     
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    unbelievably great story...
    excellent job poet...

    one love
    khasm
     
  9. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, Khasm I appriciate that.
     
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    love what you done with this piece flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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