Black Poetry : God Rest Your Soul

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's been a year
    since you've been here
    I know you've been
    checking on me for fear
    that all has gone awry
    And it has, in a way.
    But enjoy your time
    in splendor, for today
    and always you have
    Eden within your reach.
    Everyday is a sunny one
    on a tropical carefree beach.
    Let your soul rest
    in the rainbow prism of hue
    delighting in all of the colors
    eternity is emitting to you.
    And I will continue on my
    earthly voyage of thine
    own self be true.
    Knowing your aura is mine.
    Knowing I'll see you on
    the other side.
    God rest your soul.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very beautiful piece to a love one
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich, for letting me know you see beauty in this.
     
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    watzin...this was very nice
    showing divine wisdom...
    one love
    khasm
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Khasm for seeing wisdom in this piece.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...watzinaname
    you have a way of getting me...
    right where it's full of emotion
    straight to the heart...
    beautiful flow...
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was heartfelt, thankyou for feeling this scribe and responding so angelicsage.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is such a peaceful flo'


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you're feeling the serenity in it, cocobutterskyn, thanks.
     
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    jah blessings
    lady this was a wonderful piece. I'm am looking forward to more of your work.....
    one love
    BLESSINGS INTINUALLY
    REGGAEDIVA

    OH AND THANKS SO MUCH ON THE INSIGHT. i LOVE WHEN PEOPLE GIVE ME FEEDBACK. AND i WILL DEFINETLY DO THE SAME....JAH BIGUPS
     
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