Black Poetry : God or The Devil?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mr marion, Feb 28, 2002.

  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trying to figure out which one sent you in my path
    the way you make me laugh
    the way we seem to agree on the same
    the way you have everything I've ever wanted to know about
    the way your **** seems so tight
    so right
    so in time
    makes me wonder who sent you in my path

    Now that I am finally getting where I want to be
    reaching my astro high dreams
    tasting decanted wine and traveling to my destiny
    then out of no where
    you appear
    captivating me
    romancing me
    exciting me
    distracting me
    who sent you here: was it God or the Devil?
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate to your sentiments
    articulated in this
    piece Mr marion!!

    Nice poem. .... :)

    N2
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mr.Marion ya speaketh in warm whispers as i relate to ya vibe
    da flow is tyght
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. M...

    This piece is tight like that fella!!!

    Good read!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    The Blessings ...

    of the Lord make us rich AND add
    No Sorrow to IT!

    Does that answer your question???

    :heart:
    Afri
     
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