Black Poetry : God Bless You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Jun 8, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God bless you
    For making me feel this way
    Taking my heart into your hands with every hope and fear
    This is the hope that keeps me going from day to day
    Please, don't take it away...
    and hopefully what we've shared will still remain
    Please don't let me be another drifter wandering with my head in the clouds
    i trust you
    please don't let me down
    PLEASE!! don't take this feeling from me
    it would kill me softly
    you're all that i've had

    Desert Storm:confused:
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this one but does this leave room for the mistakes he would make??
    i see where a woman's clinging to a man (on this level) can be fatal,
    a travesty, an emotional wreck.
    not saying you're obsessed like that woman from ' thin love between love and hate',
    but guard yourself queen.

    infinite,
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well pose sis for da blessing i love this piece
     
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