Black Poetry : Go With What You Know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jul 18, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They want it,
    YOU got IT...

    Roll slow fast theives
    Don't know what you know
    Can't bend that pretzel logic ~

    Mo' dough don't blow your stupid mind

    Quaint angel,
    You're no Farrah Fawcett

    Ho' wearing Stardust numbered mine

    No coming out nobody's closet

    Out front life waxing
    You're behind

    So...

    Let's get this crooked party started
    My place is steady out of line

    Halfhearted off the chart
    Gone cosmic

    I'm back with gospel
    To a rhyme

    So...

    Go,
    With
    What
    You know for sure

    Don't be acting slow
    Way cool...

    Yo' go back to school
    ATTITUDE...

    Don't be nobody's fool!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :hearthis:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
  2. lilcutie

    lilcutie Active Member MEMBER

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    i know you can write. mojor luv 4 u. go on with that P-E-N. fo sho :bomb: :jawdrop: :bomb:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes what we think we know gets us into an awful lot of trouble....Keep sending those messages poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the mind can be wasted if fooled
    this was awesome 1poet how it opens mindz
    to be nobody fool.
     
  5. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was oh so nice and I picked upp a nice rhyme to this one also. You must keep up the good work with your flows because I like to read them.
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the love you have shown this lowly poet.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well spoken poets desrve love that it well spoken.
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poet...you have never been lowly.

    :pie: I've missed you so, :pie: and I see you still are the same talented writer.

    Yes, I definatly found a little beat to this one. :toast:
     
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    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nice
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and blessings, family.