Black Poetry : Go On

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Sep 27, 2001.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You didn't see me crying as you turned and walked away
    Did you
    I watched you turn your back to me and leave
    And you never once looked back

    It wouldn't have mattered though
    You wouldn't have seen my tears anyway
    They didn't fall from my eyes
    They fell from my heart

    Tears fell until I thought I'd drown
    Rushing through the cracks in my broken heart
    Flooding my senses

    Do you know how much I wanted to scream at you
    Fall to my knees and beg you to stop
    Ask you to turn around and come back
    Into my loving arms and make this terrible pain go away

    And all the while my heart was breaking
    Shattering into a million little lonely pieces
    Couldn't you hear it
    The sound of it breaking was deafening
    You had to hear it - you just didn't care

    So go

    Walk away and leave me behind
    Leave me here with my broken, bleeding heart and my memories
    Somehow I'll put the pieces back together
    Somehow I'll get over you
    I'll stop loving you too, like you stopped loving me

    Somehow, someway, sometime
    My broken heart will mend and I'll be all over you
    But not now...not yet

    First I have to die
    Then I will be reborn...with a brand new heart
    So I can love again

    (c) nfn 2000
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    girl girl girl.....

    now you know it is a true honor for me to be the first to
    post to express my sincere appreciation for this piece!


    Go Girl!
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    so you can die, be re-born....and LOVE AGAIN!!!!!

    You KNOW this is strong!!

    thank you, sis! :)

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    power in ya walk

    heart of tears
    cry
    inside of untouched
    love
    and now ya ready
    too
    move on!:heart: ;)
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd...thank you..and the honour is mine, in knowing how much you appreciate my work ...your positive support always lifts my spirit...

    a...sometimes I think when we lose that love, it's like you have to get rid of the old you and come back brand new..leavin the memories behind...thank you as always for your words...

    Rich...yep, movin on..sometimes we just have to do it...thank you for the read and the words..as always

    K