Quiet Poetry Lounge : Go get and be

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GeneticSoul, Dec 6, 2003.

  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its hard going out, getting out and being out
    when you dont know anything about, where you dont know where u are
    but how will you ever know if u dont go, get and be
    The will has to be
    there
    for you, for me
    to be able to know go get and be
    i dont want to in my heart but in my mind it say
    if you dont youll go crazy!
    My father even says go out dont just lay around
    ... get out of the house
    .... be somebody
    but how can i? i simply reply i dont know what im doing where im going how im getting there where will i be?
    I did finally but with out that "piece" of mind that sturn joy i would have at my home
    they say home is where your heart is
    and if thats sooo......
    then my heart is back in cali with my family
    my friends
    how i can.... go, get and be
    just to be
    who i can
    all i can
    where i can
    but i found out... here that there is no being something or one you cant but being
    going
    seeing all that you are
    3weeks
    3 long... drawn out weeks
    in that i have to
    go, get, and be
    plain simply cali-style young nieve me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin ya flow speak on poet
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    iiright now flow on...
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    like those rhythms .. those bes...
    like you chillin...thinking bout cali...
    keep on riffin...playing with your style
    within the sadness...you gave me smile...
    nice
     
  5. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im feelin that last one and thanks
    its like being here is giving me new reasons to write other then about love
    im finally made a friend or 2
    and figured out that lifes not just about being looked up in your own mental awareness but its about meeting new people and seeing new things.

    thanks again
    Gen~Ethic Soul
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl I hear your confusion. keep writing and listening to your heart and you will find the answer. peace, girl.