Black Poetry : Go Away!!!!

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're like a craine...dropping on my head...
    so i turn to rest in the bed...
    But you continue to drill me....
    making my head swirl...
    I wish i had some aleve...
    to take away the pain...
    but i just ignore you and try to go to sleep...
    but you keep waking me..
    poking me in my temple...
    does this seem simple...
    you constantly bothering me....
    got my head spinning...
    then my eyes get all blurred...
    and yet you still have not detoured...
    will you leave and come back later...
    Can't you see i'm not in the mood...
    i got things to do...
    you are interupting my concentration...
    I'm not interested in your penetration...
    I'm not interested in your weight upon my body....
    Hell i wasn't even bothering nobody....
    Please stop stressing me out....
    You are gonna lose this battle...
    I will take you out....


    Can some please get me some excedrine for this HEADACHE?!!!!
     
  2. baller

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    relax, my child.

    allow the stress of your day to drift away...away...away from your thoughts. let serenity flow in to take its place. remember: the body is a self-healing agent. let it do what it does best. know that LIFE IS GOOD. you woke up this morning...everything else is "the small stuff.":) hope the rest of your day is better.

    One.
     
  3. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh Baby!!!

    That is so sweet!!! Well atleast you got me smiling...even though it hurts to do so. :) Thanks. I'm going home in a few minutes so i'll just sleep when i get their.

    Thanks a bunch!!!
     
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    MORNING BLUES

    WIPE YA SAD FACE IN THE GRACE OF HE
    WHOM BE DA LORD SAVIOR
    LIKE BALLER SAID U WOKE UP TO A NEW DAY
    SO WHAT EVER TROUBLE U MAY NOT BE
    STRESS BE NOT FORTH SAINT THEE LORD
    CAST AWAY YO UNEXSPECTED AND REST FREE
    FORTH WHEN U AWAKEN YO HEART WILL NOT
    HURT MIND FREE AND SOUL HUMBLE............
    AS THE DAY GROW OLD U'LL FINE SELF SMILING:D
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God i hope so. Cause i woke up with that same dang headache. Even though i went home and went straight to sleep. Its probably i'm because i got to take this exam today for part of my certification. Its got me a little stressed out. I would say I'd feel better once its all over or like you said. The day. But that's a lie. Because that will only be the begginning. It makes me :( and :) all at the same time. :confused:
     
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    i like how you made it seem like
    a husband pestering a wife
    but really it's just a headache
    very cute!
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are Correct!!!

    Thanks...that was kind of what i was going for. Glad you noticed!! :)
     
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