Black Poetry : GLORY

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  1. karma55

    karma55 Active Member MEMBER

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    i gotta a preview through a see through mirror today
    And i saw sunshine a thousand times multiplied
    And i couldnt help but wonder where the rain went
    Then i wondered what my thoughts spent on raindrops could do to me
    and i put my shades on
    so i could see my reflection more clearly
    and i turned back towards the sunlight
    And i saw rainbows
    and as i stood atop a mountain
    I saw beauty
    unsure of my reflection til i heard a still small voice say to me "come my child"
    and i felt wanted
    And as i looked farther ahead of me
    i saw freedom
    and i tried to see behind me but i was blinded
    yet not once was i frighten
    and with one small step forward a warmth, coated the vessels of my heart where once it had been frozen
    and as i looked down at valleys i'd crossed
    I could hear myself shout, "GLORY"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As i envision this maze of journey my heart smile'd
    carried me into the depth of such GLORY
    you painted such a picture i felt i was there beside you sis wow!!!
     
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    feeling ya pham

    keep pushing towards the light

    happy belated too!

    dang you old

    hahahahahahahahhahahahaha

    ok no you're not

    lol

    :birthday::birthday::birthday::birthday:

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a visual feast and quite uplifting poetess. Welcome back karma55. :)
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    ahh you heard that inner voice...
    what a blessing...
    and such a positive piece
    tis appreciated
     
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