Black Poetry : Glisten

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Vyolet, Mar 23, 2002.

  1. Vyolet

    Vyolet Member MEMBER

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    A single tear glistens down my cheek
    but yet you still refuse to listen
    Continue to tell me that everything I have is a blessin
    Then what about the pain that I feel or is that now a lesson
    It's plain to see you dont care
    So I guess the blames on me
    But if that may be
    Why is my cheek still glistening
    and your yet to listen





    I'm new to the forum and I hope you guys like this. Thanks for reading I'm out HOLLA!
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) I'm Hollerin' WELCOME! to Destee's place for poets.
    This poem is beautiful and heart felt. Don't let it be your last post.

    Joyce
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome Vyolet

    don't mean to not hear you my friend
    as i see the tears on your cheek glisten
    my heart is pained hearing these conflicts
    that have your heart and thoughts transfixed
    knowing all things work for our good in the end
    trying to encourage you to transcend
    this moment of sorrow, hurt and despair
    it's only because i really do care

    i'm sorry ... i'm listening now :)

    Welcome To The Family :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    shout out from above !!!!

    welcome welcome welcome!!!!!!!! Vyolet
    to da playground of Destee's place :wave: :wave: in da
    flash of vibes ya scribe is tyght words from da $$Rich$$
    up in flyte..................welcome upon family & friendz
    come on in !! do yo thang ...flow us mo!:toast:
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  5. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i to welcome you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    welcome welcome welcome

    nice poem
    hope to see more
     
  6. tru07

    tru07 Member MEMBER

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    nice poem gurl. i hope you continue to write and post more.
     
  7. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm listening...what we gonna do now? .....were you listening?
     
  8. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vyolet

    Welcome to the House Sis...for real...likin the stlye Im seeing ..smoovely done...MORE MORE...I wanna see more !!!

    peace
    g-man
     
  9. Vyolet

    Vyolet Member MEMBER

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    Thanxs to all who replied to my poem. I really feel welcomed here thanxs for hollerin.

    Also thanxs for listening. :)
     
  10. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: :wave: :wave: Hey Vyolet!!!:wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome!!! Enjoyed your peace... very, very much!